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Montbello High School
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Denver, CO 80239
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Essay Rubric
RUBRIC FOR EVALUATING ESSAYS
Style/Fluency
4 points Is engaging Uses accurate, precise vocabulary that is appropriate for audience and purpose Uses active and precise verbs May use figurative language, imagery, and or striking language Is fluent, easy to read Uses an effective variety of sentence beginnings, structures, and length Is readable, neat, nearly error-free 3 points Is occasionally engaging Uses accurate but general word choice that is appropriate for the audience and purpose Uses a mix of precise and general verbs Uses familiar vocabulary and phrases with some striking language Is generally fluent with occasional choppiness Uses some variety of sentence beginnings, structures, and length Is mostly readable and neat 2 points Is somewhat bland Uses general word choice that may include occasional errors in word usage Uses a few active verbs but most are imprecise or colorless (i.e.
is, did, go) Uses familiar vocabulary and phrases Uses a variety of sentence beginnings, structure, or length but has many rambling or choppy sentences 1 point Is bland Uses inaccurate or repetitive work choice that is occasionally inappropriate for audience and purpose Uses passive, colorless, or imprecise verbs Uses vague language or frequent clichés Is incomplete or rambling Uses simple, repetitive sentence beginning, structures, and lengths OR many sentences combined needlessly Has some unreadable portions 0 points The writing is illegible
Content/Organization
4 points Meets all the requirements of the prompt Stays fully focused on topic Includes relevant information Provides main ideas and specific, elaborated details that move beyond the obvious Includes an inviting introduction, logical arrangements of ideas, and satisfying conclusion Maintains a clear order with transitions between ideas 3 points Meets most of the prompts requirements Stays mostly focused Includes mostly relevant information Provides main ideas but details are general or brief or obvious Includes a recognizable introduction, arrangement of ideas and conclusion; ideas may wander a bit; may be predictable Provides some connections between ideas with few transitions 2 points Meets some of the prompts requirements Addresses a broad topic or focuses on a trivial point Provides sketchy information that may be list-like Begins or ends abruptly; arrangement of ideas is stilted or occasionally random Rarely uses transitions 1 point Meets few of the prompts requirements Severely digresses from topic Includes much irrelevant information Does not provide main ideas or does not support them; details may be repetitious Begins or ends abruptly with no introductions or conclusion; there is little or no attempt to establish order Does not connect ideas 0 points The writing is off topic
Language Usage
2 Points Language skills successfully support meaning; few, if any, errors in the following: Subject/verb and pronoun/antecedent agreement Modifiers Punctuation; end punctuation, commas, apostrophes, quotation marks, semicolons Abbreviation and paragraphing 1 point Language skills support meaning; several errors in some or all of the following: Subject/verb and pronoun/antecedent agreement Modifiers Punctuation; end punctuation, commas, apostrophes, quotation marks, semicolons Abbreviation and paragraphing Spelling and paragraphing 0 points Language skills impede meaning; response is error-ridden
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